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Write a letter describing your landlord about the noise in his flats

Write a letter describing your landlord about the noise in his flats m33Q1
Dear Mr. Thompson, I can not resist myself to inform you that I have concerns regarding the flat that I took on rent from you six months back. It is the one located on Norway street. The issue I am facing is the noise such as music or shouting unnecessarily that comes at unwanted timings such as early morning and late night. They are the bachelors living on the ground floor of the building. I have discussed this concern with them However, They take it in a casual way and give a fake assurance to not repeat the same. Now being a family man my whole schedule is disturbed we are not able to get proper sleep which totally distresses our next day. Despite many efforts I have failed to make them understand this, Now it's my humble request to you to address my issue to them and bring out a solution for the same. Being a sincere tenant I request you to intervene on this and find out a way to my problem. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerelyMike jonas
Dear Mr. Thompson,

I can not resist myself to inform you that I have concerns regarding the flat that I took on rent from you six months back. It is the one located on Norway street. The issue I am facing is the noise such as music or shouting
unnecessarily
that
comes
at unwanted timings such as early morning and late night. They are the bachelors living on the
ground floor
of the building.

I have discussed this concern with them
However
, They take it
in a casual way
and give a fake assurance to not repeat the same.
Now
being a family
man
my whole schedule
is disturbed
we are not able to
get
proper sleep which
totally
distresses our
next
day.

Despite
many
efforts I have failed to
make
them understand this,
Now
it's my humble request to you to address my issue to them and bring out a solution for the same. Being a sincere tenant I request you to intervene on this and find out a way to my problem. Looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
sincerelyMike
jonas
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IELTS letter Write a letter describing your landlord about the noise in his flats

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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