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the end of the school year, exams

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Dear Harry! Thank you for your letter! I hope you'll take your exams successfully! In your letter, you asked me about the end of my school year. Well, I think I'll be busy preparing for my exams. Actually, I'm taking four State General Exams this year. So, I have to be ready with English, Russian, Maths and ICT. To prepare for my English exam I do grammar and vocabulary drills, write tests and dictations, discuss different topics during my English classes. As for my summer holiday's plans, in June I'm going to travel abroad and meet with my friends. In August, I'm going to visit my relatives. That's all for now. Email me soon. Best wishes, Zhenya

Dear Harry!

Thank you for your letter! I hope you'll take your exams successfully
! In your letter, you asked me about the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of my school year.

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think
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So
, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 be ready with English, Russian, Possible spelling mistake. 'Maths' is British English.Math
Maths
 and ICT.

To prepare for my English exam I do grammar and vocabulary drills, write This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluates
tests
 and dictations, discuss This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 topics during my English classes.

As for my summer holiday's plans, in June I'm going to travel abroad and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 with my friends. In August, I'm going to visit my relatives.

That's all for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. Email me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Best wishes,

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Zhenya

IELTS letter the end of the school year, exams

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

116 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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