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Study Business English at a language school in the UK in the summer

Study Business English at a language school in the UK in the summer RRReY

Dear Mr. Preston: I want to study Business English at a language school in the UK in the summer. I would like to take information from you about the course. I want to know about the course available in your school, and the length of the course. I would like to ask you about the exams that you give to students, are the exams like listening, speaking and writing or something different? . And I want to know if accommodation is provided for students or I book a hotel. I look forward to hearing from you, Sincerely Abdul Rahman

Dear Mr. Preston:

I want to study Business English at a language school in the UK in the summer. I would like to take information from you about the course. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 want to know about the course available in your school, and the length of the course. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to ask you about the exams that you give to students, are the exams like listening, speaking and writing or something This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
? Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 And I want to know if accommodation is provided
 for students or I book a hotel.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Sincerely


Abdul Rahman

IELTS letter Study Business English at a language school in the UK in the summer

Letter

American English

4 paragraphs

98 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 7.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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