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Study Business English at a language school in the UK in the summer

Study Business English at a language school in the UK in the summer RRReY
Dear Mr. Preston: I want to study Business English at a language school in the UK in the summer. I would like to take information from you about the course. I want to know about the course available in your school, and the length of the course. I would like to ask you about the exams that you give to students, are the exams like listening, speaking and writing or something different? . And I want to know if accommodation is provided for students or I book a hotel. I look forward to hearing from you, Sincerely Abdul Rahman
Dear Mr. Preston:

I want to study Business English at a language school in the UK in the summer. I would like to take information from you about the course.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
want to know about the course available in your school, and the length of the course.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like to ask you about the exams that you give to students, are the exams like listening, speaking and writing or something
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different
?
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.
And I want to know if accommodation
is provided
for students or I book a hotel.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Sincerely


Abdul Rahman
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IELTS letter Study Business English at a language school in the UK in the summer

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  American English
4 paragraphs
98 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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