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You saw a job advertisement to apply for the post of a waitress. Write to the manager and explain your skills, why you are suited for the position and when you are available to start work.

You saw a job advertisement to apply for the post of a waitress. Write to the manager and explain your skills, why you are suited for the position and when you are available to start work. dl0o6
Dear Sir, My Name is Ella Owem, an applicant in your reputed organisation. With references yo your advertisement dated 28th October 2021. I am writing to apply for the post of a waitress in your prominent restaurant. To be honest, l was amazed when l saw this great job offer and having worked in different restaurant both private and public inclusive with various hotels. I have gained lots of skills such as communication skills, ability to build rapport with people of all ages which my boss always applaud me of. I feel that possessing all this great skills that l am well suited and positioned to work in yoir great establishment which will take my career to a greater height and the possibility of adapting quickly to any work environment that l find myself. Let me say that l will be available to resume my duties immediately and l have choosen a flexible time to start with. My availability days are five days in a week ( monday to friday) at 12 noon daily. I am looking forward to discuss my credentials with you at the earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Ella Owem.
Dear Sir, My Name is Ella
Owem
, an applicant in your reputed
organisation
. With references yo your advertisement dated 28th October 2021. I am writing to apply for the post of a waitress in your prominent restaurant.

To be honest, l
was amazed
when l
saw
this great job offer and having worked in
different
restaurant both private and public inclusive with various hotels. I have gained lots of
skills
such as communication
skills
, ability to build rapport with
people
of all ages which my boss always applaud me of. I feel that possessing all this great
skills
that l am well suited and positioned to work in
yoir
great establishment which will take my career to a greater height and the possibility of adapting
quickly
to any work environment that l find myself.

Let
me say that l will be available to resume my duties immediately and l have
choosen
a flexible time to
start
with. My availability days are five days in a week
(
monday
to
friday
) at 12 noon daily. I am looking forward
to discuss
my credentials with you at the earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
, Ella
Owem
.
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IELTS letter You saw a job advertisement to apply for the post of a waitress. Write to the manager and explain your skills, why you are suited for the position and when you are available to start work.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
192 words
5.5
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