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letter to your English friend alW2G

Hi Emma, I know I haven't written to you for a long time, but I was very busy. I thought I’d tell you a little bit about the next holiday, among my family. Christmas is one of the most defining holidays I celebrate with my family. With us, setting up a Christmas tree is a common program before the big day. My mom and I make Christmas food together while listening to Christmas songs. When it snows my dad and girl brother snowman builds my yard or Christmas decorations they place in the house. In the evening, my grandmother is with us at Christmas dinner, and this is when we unpack the gifts. Do you have a favorite holiday, and if so, how do you celebrate it? I hope all is well with you! I look forward to your next letter! See you soon, Bogi

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