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letter to your English friend alW2G
Hi Emma, I know I haven't written to you for a long time, but I was very busy. I thought I’d tell you a little bit about the next holiday, among my family. Christmas is one of the most defining holidays I celebrate with my family. With us, setting up a Christmas tree is a common program before the big day. My mom and I make Christmas food together while listening to Christmas songs. When it snows my dad and girl brother snowman builds my yard or Christmas decorations they place in the house. In the evening, my grandmother is with us at Christmas dinner, and this is when we unpack the gifts. Do you have a favorite holiday, and if so, how do you celebrate it? I hope all is well with you! I look forward to your next letter! See you soon, Bogi
Hi Emma,

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holiday, among my family.

Christmas is one of the most defining holidays I celebrate with my family. With us, setting up a Christmas tree is a common program
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the
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Christmas food together while listening to Christmas songs. When it snows my dad and girl brother snowman builds my yard or Christmas decorations they place in the
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house
. In the evening, my grandmother is with us at Christmas dinner, and this is when we unpack the gifts.

Do you have a favorite holiday, and if
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, how do you celebrate it?

I hope all is well with you! I look forward to your
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you
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Bogi
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IELTS letter letter to your English friend

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  American English
7 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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