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Letter to your friend recommending to join your company as your replacement. Write 1. Details of job, 2. why are you leaving job 3. why he should join

Letter to your friend recommending to join your company as your replacement. Write 1. Details of job, 2. why are you leaving job 3. why he should join 1AWVy
Dear Sam, I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health. I am writing to you to ask you about your interest in joining my company and fill in the position of an Associate, as I have resigned. To help you with the job details for your further clarity, it is a well-known multinational company, "ABC Limited", dealing in the trading of spare parts and accessories of vehicles. Your role as an employee would be to deal with the finance department. You must be thinking about my reasons for leaving. As you are well-aware about my interest in dancing since childhood, I have now an offer from Dance workshop to be a lead dancer for their students. Also, I will get personal training from Remo D'souza, my role model. Thus, I do not want to let go off this amazing opportunity. I know that you are already looking for a job post completing your Accountancy certification, so it would be a good experience for you to join this company. They have a powerful brand image and offers a decent package. Furthermore, the work-life balance is too convenient to handle. I would really recommend you to join this company. I will wait to hear back from you on positive note. Best wishesHarry
Dear Sam,

I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health. I am writing to you to ask you about your interest in joining my
company
and fill in the position of an Associate, as I have resigned.

To
help
you with the job
details
for your
further
clarity, it is a well-known multinational
company
,
"
ABC Limited
"
, dealing in the trading of spare parts and accessories of vehicles. Your role as an employee would be to deal with the finance department.

You
must
be thinking about my reasons for leaving. As you are well-aware about my interest in dancing since childhood, I have
now
an offer from Dance workshop to be a lead dancer for their students.
Also
, I will
get
personal training from
Remo
D'
souza
, my role model.
Thus
, I do not want to
let
go off this amazing opportunity.

I know that you are already looking for a job post completing your Accountancy certification,
so
it would be a
good
experience for you to
join
this
company
. They have a powerful brand image and offers a decent package.
Furthermore
, the work-life balance is too convenient to handle. I would
really
recommend you to
join
this
company
.

I will wait to hear back from you on
positive
note.

Best
wishesHarry
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IELTS letter Letter to your friend recommending to join your company as your replacement. Write 1. Details of job, 2. why are you leaving job 3. why he should join

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
213 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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