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you have recently moved to a different house explain why you move, describe new house and invite your friend to come and visit

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Dear Mike, How’re you bro? How’s life? I wish everything is OK at your end. I would like to tell you that I am a happy spirit nowadays as I recently moved to a new house. The old one which I have been living for 5 years was suffer from a lot of issues like water leaks, bad heating system and painting cracks so I decide to get a new house which is great and everything works fine. It has a big garden with different types of flowers which will be a source of happiness to kids. Moreover, it has a great yard will be ready for our barbeque parties and a lot of free rooms. I wish you can come with your family to see with a real eye and I will be over the moon if you accept my invitation to bump into together and spend a nice time. Look forward to seeing you soon.
Dear Mike,

How’re you bro? How’s life? I wish everything is OK at your
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tell
you that I am a happy spirit nowadays as I recently
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moved
to a new
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house
. The
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old
one which I have been living for 5 years was
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suffer
from
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a lot of
issues like water leaks,
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bad
heating system and painting cracks
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so
I decide to
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get
a new
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house
which is great and everything works fine. It has a
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big
garden with
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different
types of flowers which will be a source of happiness to kids.
Moreover
, it has a great yard will be ready for our
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barbeque
parties and
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a lot of
free rooms. I wish you can
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come
with your family to
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see
with a real eye and I will be over the moon if you accept my invitation to bump into together and spend a nice time.

Look forward to seeing you
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soon
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IELTS letter you have recently moved to a different house explain why you move, describe new house and invite your friend to come and visit

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  American English
3 paragraphs
157 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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