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Dear Jose, I am a second-year undergraduate student from the engineering faculty at Niagara College. Two weeks ago I forgot my wallet on the bus and my student card was within it. I am writing to inform you of the card loss and to ask for a replacement. I take the bus on a daily basis to move from college to home. On the last ride, I was traveling with some classmates and one of them asked me to lend him money. Therefore I took my wallet out of my pocket but I forgot to put it back again. As you may understand, this has been a stressful situation for me. I am currently using my citizen identification to access the university facilities however, the security staff at the front gate always take ten minutes to validate my information. Additionally, I cannot use resources like computers, printers, meeting rooms nor take books from the library which I regularly use to complete my assignments. I am kindly hoping you could assist me in the process to obtain a new one. For this, I shall be in your debt. Faithfully yours, Jonathan
Dear Jose,

I am a second-year undergraduate student from the engineering faculty at Niagara College. Two weeks ago I forgot my wallet on the bus and my student card was within it. I am writing to inform you of the card loss and to
ask for
a replacement.

I take the bus on a daily basis to
move
from college to home. On the last ride, I was traveling with
some
classmates and one of them asked me to lend him money.
Therefore
I took my wallet out of my pocket
but
I forgot to put it back again.

As you may understand, this has been a stressful situation for me. I am
currently
using my citizen identification to access the university facilities
however
, the security staff at the front gate always take ten minutes to validate my information.
Additionally
, I cannot
use
resources like computers, printers, meeting rooms nor take books from the library which I
regularly
use to
complete my assignments.

I am kindly hoping you could assist me in the process to obtain a new one. For this, I shall be in your debt.

Faithfully
yours,

Jonathan
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IELTS letter help me to understand yout idow

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  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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