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write a letter to a friend telling them that you helped someone

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Hi Annie, Long time no see! How's everything? I am just fine. Since I changed schools, we haven't seen each other for a long time. I hope you and your family are doing well through the Covid-19 epidemic. I'm writing this letter thought to share with you a wonderful experience I had last week. Do you remember Ms. Mary of our school who used to teach us Maths? I was on my way home after buying some food then I was taken aback when I saw her across the street the other day and was curious where her husband was while she was pregnant. As I was going to approach her to say hello, a group of four or five young people passed by and shoved her, causing her to drop her bag. The fruits in the bag tumbled away when the sack crashed to the ground. Perhaps she had just returned from the market. Even though the young guys were aware of this, they did not return to apologize or assist Ms. Mary in gathering her belongings. They simply returned the smile and went away fast. You know what? The people walking on the street did not even stop the car to help Ms. Mary. Seeing that, I immediately ran to assist her in picking up the oranges that were still falling, carefully placing them in the bag, and returning them to her. I greeted her but it take a while for her to realize who I was, I think that is because I hadn't seen her since 4th grade until now. Ms. Mary thanks me and wanted to invite me to dinner to express her gratitude, but I declined and told her that it was unnecessary. She dared not pass because there were so many cars, therefore I asked her where she wanna go then I took her there; on the way, she and I had a nice conversation. I know that my actions aren't really significant. However, I am still immensely pleased and content when I am able to help an individual in need in some small way. Wonderful things may be made from simple things, and the most essential thing is that it originates from each person's love and sincerity. When you help someone, they are more inclined to help you in return. Therefore, in the future, I will strive to accomplish more and better things to contribute to a more evolved society. Speaking of which, I still have a lot of homework to do, therefore this ends the letter. Next time, would you like to go visit her with me? And it would be fantastic if you could also invite some of our old pals. It would be great if you send me a letter and tell me about some good work you've done.
Hi Annie,

Long time no
see
! How's everything? I am
just
fine. Since I
changed
schools, we haven't
seen
each other for a long time. I hope you and your family are doing well through the Covid-19 epidemic. I'm writing this letter
thought
to share with you a wonderful experience I had last week.

Do you remember Ms. Mary of our school who
used
to teach us
Maths
? I was on my way home after buying
some
food then I
was taken
aback when I
saw
her across the street the other day and was curious where her husband was while she was pregnant. As I was going to approach her to say hello, a group of four or five young
people
passed by and shoved her, causing her to drop her bag. The fruits in the bag tumbled away when the sack crashed to the ground. Perhaps she had
just
returned from the market.
Even though
the young guys were aware of this, they did not return to apologize or assist
Ms
. Mary in gathering her belongings. They
simply
returned the smile and went away
fast
.

You know what? The
people
walking on the street did not even
stop
the car to
help
Ms. Mary. Seeing that, I immediately ran to assist her in picking up the oranges that were
still
falling,
carefully
placing them in the bag, and returning them to her. I greeted her
but
it
take
a while for her to realize who I was, I
think
that is
because
I hadn't
seen
her since 4th grade until
now
.
Ms
. Mary thanks me and wanted to invite me to dinner to express her gratitude,
but
I declined and
told
her that it was unnecessary. She dared not pass
because
there were
so
many
cars,
therefore
I asked her where she
wanna
go then I took her there; on the way, she and I had a nice conversation.

I know that my actions aren't
really
significant.
However
, I am
still
immensely
pleased
and content when I am able to
help
an individual in need in
some
small
way. Wonderful things may
be made
from simple things, and the most essential thing is that it originates from each person's
love
and sincerity. When you
help
someone, they are more inclined to
help
you in return.
Therefore
, in the future, I will strive to accomplish more and better things to contribute to a more evolved society.

Speaking of which, I
still
have
a lot of
homework to do,
therefore
this ends the letter.
Next
time,
would
you like to go visit her with me? And it would be fantastic if you could
also
invite
some
of our
old
pals. It would be great if you
send
me a letter and
tell
me about
some
good
work you've done.
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IELTS letter write a letter to a friend telling them that you helped someone

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  American English
6 paragraphs
469 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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