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You saw a car accident. Now you have been asked to write a report for the police describing the scene.Explain when and where you saw the accident. Describe the road conditions, what you saw, and how many people and vehicles were involved. Explain who you feel was responsible and why.

You saw a car accident. Now you have been asked to write a report for the police describing the scene. Explain when and where you saw the accident. Describe the road conditions, what you saw, and how many people and vehicles were involved. Explain who you feel was responsible and why. pRW0D
Dear officer, last night, I was travelling to my home from office. Consequently, when I arrived to the Derry and Dixie intersection I become a witness of unusual situation. Actually, yesterday was a snowy so the front driver of my car when he look the red lights on the crossing he try to push his breaks. Unfortunately, he was not able to make a stop to it. Therefore, his vehicle went inside the central area of the passing road. On the moment, I think it was a civic which was coming on the right side of the road had come straight into it. Both cars, were in a bad shape. After that, My hand become freeze and my brain did not able to do anything. Then, I made myself strong and dial the emergency number. Certain minutes later, the responding team reached at place and handle all the scenario. Also, i realized that travelers in both cars did not have any injury and in a good shape. Meanwhile, the movers were totally become demolished even I think they would be towed because its tire came into inside and front glasses had a scratches all over it. in my point of view, it was happened because of extreme weather condition. I think the people of both side are saved. I hope you will understand the things which was going on that night. further, if you will need any information regard to it please contact me. Thank you
Dear officer,

last night, I was travelling to my home from office.
Consequently
, when I arrived to the Derry and Dixie intersection I become a witness of unusual situation.

Actually, yesterday was a snowy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
the front driver of my car when he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "looks", "looked".
look
the red lights on the crossing he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "tries", "tried".
try
to push his breaks. Unfortunately, he was not able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
to it.
Therefore
, his vehicle went inside the central area of the passing road. On the moment, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it was a civic which was coming on the right side of the road had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
straight into it. Both cars, were in a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
shape.

After that, My hand become freeze and my brain did not able to do anything. Then, I made myself strong and dial the emergency number. Certain minutes later, the responding team reached at place and handle all the scenario.
Also
,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
realized that travelers in both cars did not have any injury and in a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
shape. Meanwhile, the movers were
totally
become demolished even I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
they would
be towed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
its tire came into inside and front glasses had a scratches all over it.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
in
my point of view, it
was happened
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of extreme weather condition. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
of both side
are saved
. I hope you will understand the things which was going on that night.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
further
, if you will need any information regard to it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
contact me.

Thank you
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IELTS letter You saw a car accident. Now you have been asked to write a report for the police describing the scene. Explain when and where you saw the accident. Describe the road conditions, what you saw, and how many people and vehicles were involved. Explain who you feel was responsible and why.

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6.0
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