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You recently visited your cousin during your semester break. You had a wonderful time there and enjoyed thoroughly.

You recently visited your cousin during your semester break. You had a wonderful time there and enjoyed thoroughly. GMRwg
Dear jig’s, Hope you and your family well, I am writing this letter to thankful to you for wonderful time we spent to gather. I wanted to share unforgettable memories which I spent with you. First I accepted your invitation I thought it’s like changing mood visit but I never thought it is to joyful time. I visited Bombay so many times but never visit India gate and marine drive. Both is extremely wonderful places. In more evening views of marine drive is stunning landscape. Also enjoy lot at water park. I think it is one of big water part I have visited still. I am heartily thankful to you especially for your plan. Now it is your turn to come at my place. I am very excited to spend time with you and your family. I will show you so many good places that I have already made plan in mind. Hope see you soon. Thankful to you and your family with regards and love. Your lovingly, jignesh
Dear jig’s,

Hope you and your family well, I am writing this letter
Did you mean "too thankful to"?
to thankful to
you for wonderful
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time
we spent to gather.

I wanted to share unforgettable memories which I spent with you.
First
I
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accepted
your invitation I
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thought
it’s like changing mood visit
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but
I never
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thought
it is to joyful
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time
. I visited Bombay
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so
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many
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times
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but
never visit India gate and marine drive. Both is
extremely
wonderful places. In more evening views of marine drive is stunning landscape.
Also
enjoy lot at water park. I
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think
it is one of
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big
water part I have visited
still
. I am
heartily
thankful to you
especially
for your plan.

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Now
it is your turn to
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come
at my place. I am
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very
excited to spend
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time
with you and your family. I will
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show
you
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so
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many
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good
places that I have already made plan in mind. Hope
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see
you
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soon
. Thankful to you and your family with regards and
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love
.

Your
lovingly
,

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jignesh
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IELTS letter You recently visited your cousin during your semester break. You had a wonderful time there and enjoyed thoroughly.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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