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You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university

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Dear Kate, I hope you are doing well with all your studies. Accept my sincere apology for not writing to you for a long time. My husband was ill and as a result I had to take care of him for a long time. Now thanks God he got well. Now we both want to visit your town after his recovery. Because it was his doctor's advice. It will be very useful for his health as my consideration. Before visiting your town I would like to have more information about that place and make a plan when and where to go. Also what to have as we have short time for traveling. It would be suitable for us to stay in a nice, up to date hotel near the city center. It must not be so expensive but cozy with excellent service. I intend to have more fun with evening activities as we have more spare time in the evening. I have heard that there are best opera houses there as you know both I and my husband eager to listen operas. Besides we should go dancing clubs because it helps my husband to relax and enjoy. I will be very grateful if you write your answer letter as soon as possible. With love, Ann Brown.
Dear Kate,

I hope you are doing well with all your studies. Accept my sincere apology for not writing to you for a long
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time
. My husband was ill and
as a result
I had to take care of him for a long
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time
.
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Now
thanks God he
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well.

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Now
we both want to visit your town after his recovery.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
it was his doctor's advice. It will be
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very
useful for his health as my consideration.

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Before
visiting your town I would like to have more information about that place and
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make
a plan when and where to go.
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Also
what to have as we have short
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time
for traveling. It would be suitable for us to stay in a nice, up to date hotel near the city center. It
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must
not be
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so
expensive
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but
cozy with excellent service.

I intend to have more fun with evening activities as we have more spare
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time
in the evening. I have heard that there
A determiner is probably missing here: "are the best".
are best
opera
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houses
there as you know both I and my husband eager to listen operas.
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Besides
we should go dancing clubs
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because
it
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helps
my husband to relax and enjoy.

I will be
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very
grateful if you write your answer letter as
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soon
as possible.

With
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love
,

Ann Brown.
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IELTS letter You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
216 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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