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Apology letter to consumer from shop assistant

Apology letter to consumer from shop assistant e5paB
Dear John AdamsPlease accept my sincere apology for sending wrong TV -set which was sending by our electronical shop. I want to explain this situation. Firstly, our new worker got confused and mistakenly sent another TV-set. Secondly, your product had been adjusted other consumer's Tv-set before sending their owners. I am trully sorry for such situation. I have also arranged to send your TV-set for a short time. If you want to come to our shop, you can come and bring away yourself. I understand your disapointment and I am truly sorry. I promise it will be never returned in the future. we will not do this confusing any more. Yours faithfullySara Brown
Dear John
AdamsPlease
accept my sincere apology for sending
wrong
TV -set which was sending by our
electronical
shop. I want to
explain
this situation.
Firstly
, our new worker
got
confused and
mistakenly
sent
another TV-set.
Secondly
, your product had
been adjusted
other consumer's
Tv-set
before
sending their owners. I am
trully
sorry for such situation. I have
also
arranged to
send
your TV-set for a short time. If you want to
come
to our shop, you can
come
and bring away yourself. I understand your
disapointment
and I am
truly
sorry. I promise it
will be never
returned in
the future.
we
will not do this confusing
any more
. Yours
faithfullySara
Brown
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IELTS letter Apology letter to consumer from shop assistant

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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