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You have been tasked with organizing an IT training course for your employees.

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to inform you about IT training course for our employees. Our company specializes in distributing any goods to their address through the country. This involves to be knowledgeable of IT skills. Thus, we made an agreement to teach our employees about IT. According to our worker’s schedule some employees work from 8 o’clock to 1o’clock and the others work from 1 to 6. So the comfortable time is from 1 to 2. What is more, it would be more better if we could plan the course for three days. For instance, on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays. Besides that, we want to know what equipment requirements need for us. Your know our accommodation is located in the center. We were provided with instant internet. Although we have some computers and some piece of furniture, we need some more. Due to the fact that there are not enough devices for our employees. I would be really grateful if you give your attention to my letter and said your opinions. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully Mrs Jumaqulova

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to inform you about IT training course for our employees. Our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 specializes in distributing any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 to their address through the country. This involves to be knowledgeable of IT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. Thus
, we made an agreement to teach our employees about IT. According to our worker’s schedule This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 employees work from 8 o’clock to 1o’clock and the others work from 1 to 6. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 the comfortable time is from 1 to 2. What is more
, it would be Use only "better" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.better
more better
 if we could plan the course for three days. For instance
, on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays. Besides
 that, we want to know what equipment requirements need for us. Your know our accommodation is located
 in the center. We were provided
 with instant internet. Although we have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 computers and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 piece of furniture, we need This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 more. Due to the fact that there are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 devices for our employees.

I would be really
 grateful if you give your attention to my letter and said your opinions.

I look forward to hearing from you as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Yours Faithfully


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Jumaqulova