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Write a letter to your friend inviting him\her to attend the attend the party . In your letter .

Write a letter to your friend inviting him\her to attend the attend the party. In your letter. m1MoK
Dear Grace, I'd love  it  If you  could  come to wedding party of my nephew  that will be held on 25 the  August 2021 at 7: 30 pm onwards  at the ''Milani  '' restaurant.   Can you believe  it our little boy all grown up getting married?   Merry, his fiancée, is  a sociable young girl and will get on well. Fred  will be  so thrilled  to  introduce you to her.   He often says how  much  he  misses you since  you moved away.   He was admired  listening your advise.   Anyway  my sister decided to book jazz band  to play during the wedding party. Hopefully, the weather will be fine and we can be stroll our city.   So that you can cope to visit shrines and landmarks which  is  located in center of the country. We hope you to see you in August. All the Best,  Nora
Dear Grace, I'd
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'' restaurant.
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a sociable young girl and will
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introduce you to her.
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listening your 
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Anyway
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my sister decided to book jazz band
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to play during the wedding party.
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our city.
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that you can cope to visit shrines and landmarks which
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located in center of the country. We hope you to
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you in August. All the Best,
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Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Nora
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend inviting him\her to attend the attend the party. In your letter.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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