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Write a letter to an editor of a newspaper about a mistake from a recent article. Include What the mistake was How they can correct it How to avoid this mistake in the future

Write a letter to an editor of a newspaper about a mistake from a recent article. Include What the mistake was How they can correct it How to avoid this mistake in the future awgnV
Hello Mr. / MS. …. . Greetings, I hope this letter finds you well. Purpose of this letter is to express my suggestion and notify you about a recent mistake I observed in your esteemed newspaper article. I am one of the biggest fan of your newspaper and reading the same from at least 5 years daily. In yesterday’s article about recent surge in Covid 19 cases in India reached to number 200000/day. Which made me realize that figures are not correct, as these figure are 2 days old as per my detailed research. I will be deeply thankful if paper can track and provide the daily and original figure of Covid related cases, as we completely rely on your information for latest the updates around the world. This problem can be resolved permanently, if someone from your institute can be in direct contact with the medical authorities of the different regions. Once again I would like to thank you and your team for remarkable job and the hard work for maintain such reliable print media. Regards Rishi Saxena
Hello Mr. / MS. ….
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Greetings, I hope this letter finds you well. Purpose of this letter is to express my suggestion and notify you about a recent mistake I observed in your esteemed newspaper article.

I am one of the biggest fan of your newspaper and reading the same from at least 5 years daily. In yesterday’s article about recent surge in
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
Covid 19
cases in India reached to number 200000/day. Which made me realize that figures are not correct, as
Did you mean "this figure" or "these figures"?
these figure
are 2 days
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
as per my detailed research.

I will be
deeply
thankful if paper can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
and provide the daily and original figure of
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
Covid
related cases, as we completely rely on your information for latest the updates around the world. This problem can
be resolved
permanently
, if someone from your institute can be in direct contact with the medical authorities of the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
regions.

Once again I would like to thank you and your team for remarkable job and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work for maintain such reliable print media.

Regards

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Rishi
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Saxena
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IELTS letter Write a letter to an editor of a newspaper about a mistake from a recent article. Include What the mistake was How they can correct it How to avoid this mistake in the future

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7 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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