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you resently traveled to New York and you were completly dissatisfied with the hotel servise you stayed at. Write a letter to the hotel manager

you resently traveled to New York and you were completly dissatisfied with the hotel servise you stayed at. Write a letter to the hotel manager aqA8G
Dear Sr/MadamI am your regular customer and I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with service in your hotel, which I stayed last week. I considered that this hotel is very popular and comfortable in the world. So that I always stay there when I need. Unfortunatly, I am not satisfied with hotel servise in my last visit. I am writing to draw your attention to table servise, espesally behevior of your waiters. Let me explain the situation I wanted to eat a speical meal and I told the waiter, whose name is Nilufar, that she should book me a particular food soon as possibly. Firstly, it seemed all things are ritht, however I was waited a period of time. I did not still got my dinner. When I wanted what happened and asked the waiter, she ansrred me very roughly. The main problem is that she apsolutly forgot about my order. Thus my dinner break was over and I had to work whole day without dinner. I hope you will understand that I was so dessatisfied with this position. I would like to hear your explanation for the above problem. I would be very greatful if you could give attention to your waiter's beheviour, becouse the are quit rude. I look forward to hearing from you. Your faithfully.
Dear Sr/
MadamI
am your regular
customer and
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with service in your hotel, which I stayed last week. I considered that this hotel is
very
popular and comfortable in the world.
So
that I always stay there when I need.
Unfortunatly
, I am not satisfied with hotel
servise
in my last visit. I am writing to draw your attention to table
servise
,
espesally
behevior
of your waiters.
Let
me
explain
the situation I wanted to eat a
speical
meal and I
told
the waiter, whose name is
Nilufar
, that she should book me a particular food
soon
as
possibly
.
Firstly
, it seemed all things are
ritht
,
however
I
was waited
a period of time. I did not
still
got
my dinner. When I wanted what happened and asked the waiter, she
ansrred
me
very
roughly. The main problem is that she
apsolutly
forgot about my order.
Thus
my dinner break was over and I had to work whole day without dinner. I hope you will understand that I was
so
dessatisfied
with this position. I would like to hear your explanation for the above problem.
I
would be
very
greatful
if you could give attention to your waiter's
beheviour
,
becouse
the
are quit
rude.
I
look forward to hearing from you. Your
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter you resently traveled to New York and you were completly dissatisfied with the hotel servise you stayed at. Write a letter to the hotel manager

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  American English
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