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A foreign friend is coming to study in your town next year and has written to ask for information. Write a letter to your friend to give advice

A foreign friend is coming to study in your town next year and has written to ask for information. Write a letter to your friend to give advice NmMXm
Thanks very much for your previous letter, I am jubilant to hear from you for such a long time that you are doing a good job on your learning journey. So, you got a chance to study in my town next year. Of course, I know this opportunity will not be easy, but don’t worry, I have manyadvice for you that you could contemplate ensuring your learning journey goes smoothly. Firstly, accommodation is an essential factor for foreign learners which could affect your life and learning result, I highly recommend you to rent the Picky Motel which is nearby numerous bus stops, convenience stores and the renting price is absolutely reasonable. Additionally, you sometimes ought to pay for the fee, rent price, and school stationery at great expense. Therefore, finding a part-time job to be financially independent might be a good idea, you could apply to be an English teacher or a translator. These positions could help you to earn money to fulfill your cost of living. I also work as a teaching assistant; Therefore, if you want I could introduce you to the manager consequently you can have an opportunity to get a vacancy. Eventually, I want to inform you that foreigners learning in Viet Nam do not only face financial problems on the contrary they also cope with language obstacles; especially when you join academic subjects. Taking a Vietnamese course at ‘’ Look at my nails ‘’ is beneficial since this center offers to learners a plethora of conventional to advanced lessons, Vietnamese vocabulary, and slang which are constantly updated. Moreover, you can both take ''Look At My Nails'' courses online and offline, which help you to save time and suit your study style. If you want to study, let’s have a look at LAMYVietnamese. com to apply for a course and study from now. I hope that all my advice could help you to solve your inquiry and reduce anxiety. I will be cheerful if you could make studying time memorable and build up your relationship.
Thanks
very
much for your previous letter, I am jubilant to hear from you for such a long time that you are doing a
good
job on your
learning
journey.
So
, you
got
a chance to
study
in my town
next
year. Of
course
, I know this opportunity will not be easy,
but
don’t worry, I have
manyadvice
for you that you could contemplate ensuring your
learning
journey goes
smoothly
.
Firstly
, accommodation is an essential factor for foreign learners which could affect your life and
learning
result, I
highly
recommend you to rent the Picky Motel which is nearby numerous bus
stops
, convenience stores and the renting price is
absolutely
reasonable.
Additionally
, you
sometimes
ought to pay for the fee, rent price, and school stationery at great expense.
Therefore
, finding a part-time job to be
financially
independent might be a
good
idea
, you could apply to be an English teacher or a translator. These positions could
help
you to earn money to fulfill your cost of living. I
also
work as a teaching assistant;
Therefore
, if you want I could introduce you to the manager
consequently
you can have an opportunity to
get
a vacancy.
Eventually
, I want to inform you that foreigners
learning
in
Viet
Nam do not
only
face financial problems
on the contrary
they
also
cope with language obstacles;
especially
when you
join
academic subjects. Taking a Vietnamese
course
at ‘’ Look at my nails ‘’ is beneficial since this center offers to learners a plethora of conventional to advanced lessons, Vietnamese vocabulary, and slang which are
constantly
updated.
Moreover
, you can both take ''Look At My Nails''
courses
online and offline, which
help
you to save time and suit your
study
style. If you want to
study
,
let
’s have a look at
LAMYVietnamese
.
com
to apply for a
course
and
study
from
now
. I hope that all my advice could
help
you to solve your inquiry and
reduce
anxiety. I will be cheerful if you could
make
studying time memorable and build up your relationship.
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IELTS letter A foreign friend is coming to study in your town next year and has written to ask for information. Write a letter to your friend to give advice

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
339 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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