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You are going on holiday and you would like to hire a car. One of your parties is in wheelchair.Explain the reason you need a car, describe the type of a car you need, ask what the price is and what it includes.

You are going on holiday and you would like to hire a car. One of your parties is in wheelchair. Explain the reason you need a car, describe the type of a car you need, ask what the price is and what it includes. OMrQy
Dear Sir or MadamI am citizen of Andijan and I live on street Baxor. I am writing a letter of applucation for your institution. I am your pernament customer and I am going to have a road trip in my summer holidays. I will be very pleased if you rent me a car, which is aviable from June 6 to 20. I am travelling with my friend, who moves in a wheelchair and we have a lot of equipments for this long journey. I need a roomy car, so that my friend can get in with his wheelchair. Deu to the fact we cross the mountains, rivers on our trip, we insist on having a car with air condition as our holuday is held in summer. I want to know if you have a preriquistin rent price for disabled people. If you have a car with the required conditions, please confirn it so we can book it and make a prepayment. In anticipation to hearing from you soon. Yours, Sincerly.
Dear Sir or
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MadamI
am citizen of
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Andijan
and I
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live
on street
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Baxor
. I am writing a letter of
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applucation
for your institution. I am your
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pernament
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customer and
I am going to have a road trip in my summer holidays.
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I
will be
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very
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pleased
if you rent me a
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car
, which is
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aviable
from June 6 to 20.
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I
am travelling with my friend, who
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moves
in a
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wheelchair and
we have
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a lot of
equipments for this long journey.
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I
need a roomy
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car
,
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so
that my friend can
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get
in with his wheelchair.
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Deu
to the fact we cross the mountains, rivers on our trip, we insist on having a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
with air condition as our
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holuday
is held
in summer. I want to know if you have a
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preriquistin
rent price for disabled
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people
. If you have a
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car
with the required conditions,
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please
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confirn
it
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so
we can book it and
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make
a prepayment. In anticipation to hearing from you
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soon
. Yours,
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Sincerly
.
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IELTS letter You are going on holiday and you would like to hire a car. One of your parties is in wheelchair. Explain the reason you need a car, describe the type of a car you need, ask what the price is and what it includes.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
170 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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