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Complaint letter for purchased thing

Complaint letter for purchased thing qL6Br

Dear SirI am writing to complain about the vacuum cleaner, which I recently bought from your shop. After two days the things started to go wrong. On the 24 th of May I went to one of your local shops in order to purchase a vacuum cleaner for my elder sister's birthday. Looking around the shop I encountered, expected item and I asked a shop assistant about it. After getting all information, I decided to purchase it. On the contrary, 2 days later my elder sister made a call, said about the problem of the item. First day the item was well-functional, but the next day it had a strange sound while it was being worked. My elder sister did not take a consideration it, but the same sound repeated the other day. Furthermore, the vacuum cleaner gets warm a lot and can not take dusty from the rug. I would like you to replace the item with well-functioning one and I expect the same unit and brand. Otherwise, unfortunately I will be forced to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Your faithfullyAgatha Gristle.

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After
 two days the things This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to go This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
. On the Did you mean "24th"?24th
24 th
 of May I went to one of your local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
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purchase
 a vacuum cleaner for my elder sister's birthday. Looking around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 I encountered, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
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item
 and I asked a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 assistant about it. After getting all information, I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. On the contrary
, 2 days later my elder sister made a call, said about the problem of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
item
. First
 day the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
item
 was well-functional, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the next
 day it had a strange sound while it was being worked
. My elder sister did not take a consideration it, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the same sound repeated the other day. Furthermore
, the vacuum cleaner This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 warm a lot and can not take dusty from the rug. I would like you to replace the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
item
 with well-functioning one and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 the same unit and brand. Otherwise
, unfortunately I will be forced
 to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Your Possible spelling mistake found.faithfully Agatha
faithfullyAgatha
 Gristle. 