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You are organizing a seminar for your company. Write a letter to the manager of another department inviting them to give a presentation at the seminar. In your letter: • • give details of the seminar • • invite them to give a presentation and say why you are inviting them • • say what the presentation should be about

You are organizing a seminar for your company. Write a letter to the manager of another department inviting them to give a presentation at the seminar. In your letter: • • give details of the seminar • • invite them to give a presentation and say why you are inviting them • • say what the presentation should be about D62rk
Dear Mr. Anderson, I am writing with regard to a seminar that I am organising for the next month in our company. The seminar will cover the topic of efficient methods which play crucial role for our productivy in our daily business life. Both technical and social approacges will be presented during the seminar. It would be my honour to have you as one of the presenters in this seminar. I am definitely conviced that you, head of HR department, can point out substantial headings about social skills. Since we have been facing some communication problems between various departments, I would kindly ask for a comprehensive presentatipn about effective communication. It would be really benefical, if you are able to incorparate some real life experiences to not bother employers with full of theory. It would be my pleasure if you would be able to attend this seminar with your presentation. I look forward to receiving your reply. Your sincerely, Mert Can Kilinc
Dear Mr. Anderson,

I am writing with regard to a
seminar
that I am
organising
for the
next
month in our
company
.

The
seminar
will cover the topic of efficient methods which play crucial role for our
productivy
in our daily business life. Both technical and social
approacges
will
be presented
during the seminar.

It would be my
honour
to have you as one of the presenters in this
seminar
. I am definitely
conviced
that you, head of HR department, can point out substantial headings about social
skills
.

Since we have been facing
some
communication problems between various departments, I would kindly
ask for
a comprehensive
presentatipn
about effective communication. It would be
really
benefical
, if you are able to
incorparate
some
real life experiences to not bother employers with full of theory.

It would be my pleasure if you would be able to attend this
seminar
with your presentation.

I look forward to receiving your reply.

Your
sincerely
,

Mert
Can
Kilinc
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IELTS letter You are organizing a seminar for your company. Write a letter to the manager of another department inviting them to give a presentation at the seminar. In your letter: • • give details of the seminar • • invite them to give a presentation and say why you are inviting them • • say what the presentation should be about

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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