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A correction in international magazine regarding a town name

A correction in international magazine regarding a town name mWb0n
Dear Sir, I have been reading your magazine since last five years as I am itself a travel enthusiast and recently I was reading your latest edition which was published just few days back regarding a place where one of your article was describing the places to visit in the town and the various cuisines and there religious places as well as there art culture. As I just read the title of the article I was very happy to know that it was mine hometown that you were writing about and that too it was published in my favourite magazine that represents internationally and I was elated that now people will know my hometown and the tourism sector here will get the boost due to your essay. But due to my disappointment as I look up the article that the town spelling was given wrong as the orginal name Quilon rather than Kuilon as i found this mistake due to the photos attached with this article as it represented the place which i visited last year It is important to correct the name of the town in your magazine as your avid readers may get wrong information about a place which even don't exist in Google map and it would impact the travellers who would like to visit this place for its art and culture as well as its cuisine I would suggest you to please republish or give a information about the article in your latest edition that will be releasing next week that there was a error in the magazine regarding the name beautiful place from Kuilon to Quilon
Dear Sir,

I have been reading your
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magazine
since last five years as I am itself a travel enthusiast and

recently I was reading your latest edition which
was published
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just
few days back regarding a

place where one of your
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article
was describing the
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places
to visit in the town and the various cuisines

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and
there religious
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places
as well
as there art culture.

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read the title of the
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article
I was
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very
happy to know that it was mine hometown that you were

writing about and that too it
was published
in my
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favourite
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magazine
that represents
internationally
and I

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was
elated that
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now
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people
will know my hometown and the tourism sector here will
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get
the boost due to your essay.

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But
due to my disappointment as I look up the
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article
that the town spelling was
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given
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wrong
as the
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orginal
name
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Quilon


rather
than
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Kuilon
as
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i
found this mistake due to the photos attached with this
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article
as it represented the

place which
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i
visited last year

It is
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important
to correct the name of the town in your
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magazine
as your avid readers may
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get
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wrong
information about a

place which even don't exist in Google map and it would impact the
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travellers
who would like to visit this
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place
for its art

and culture
as well
as its cuisine

I would suggest you to
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please
republish or give
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a
information about the
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article
in your latest edition that will be releasing

next
week that there was
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a
error in the
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magazine
regarding the name
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beautiful
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place
from
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Kuilon
to
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Quilon
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