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contract stated that the perfomance assessment was not handled properly

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Hi Michelle, I am writing to inform you that as per my contract there should be a process on how the performance and assessment should be handled and given that I worked for almost 2 weeks is a very limited time to adjust to standards and company policy. Therefore, I think the organization did not handle properly it. As I reviewed the contract, it is stated that the immediate superior will conduct training and coaching sessions relevant to my role. Unfortunately, there was no coaching. Almost 2 weeks is a limited time to adjust as to any organization, as anyone would agree. As I did my task, I submitted progress at the end of the day. It is expected that there may be mistakes since I am new to the company, but I expect that there will be a mark-up to rectify my mistakes and learn from them. However, there is nothing. For the Emapta, I expected they would be a mediator at your end, but the organization did not even ask the employee to defend oneself, as it was one-sided only.
Hi Michelle,

I am writing to inform you that as per my contract there should be a process on how the performance and assessment should
be handled
and
given
that I worked for almost 2 weeks is a
very limited
time to adjust to standards and
company
policy.
Therefore
, I
think
the organization did not handle
properly
it.

As I reviewed the contract, it
is stated
that the immediate superior will conduct training and coaching sessions relevant to my role. Unfortunately, there was no coaching. Almost 2 weeks is a limited time to adjust as to any organization, as anyone would
agree
. As I did my task, I submitted progress at the
end
of the day. It is
expected
that there may be mistakes since I am new to the
company
,
but
I
expect
that there will be a mark-up to rectify my mistakes and learn from them.
However
, there is nothing. For the
Emapta
, I
expected
they would be a mediator at your
end
,
but
the organization did not even ask the employee to defend oneself, as it was one-sided
only
.
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IELTS letter contract stated that the perfomance assessment was not handled properly

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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