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You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with three friends. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. Write a letter to the letting agency. In the letter: • explain your situation • describe the problems with the house • say what you would like to happen

You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with three friends. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. Write a letter to the letting agency. In the letter: • explain your situation • describe the problems with the house • say what you would like to happen y6DJ

Dear Mr. Janky, I am writing to inform you of the multiple problems observed in Flat 32a, Private Lounge we rented from your agency last month. My friends and I moved into the flat just last week. Everything seemed great until the rains started three days ago. We woke up to pools of water in the four rooms and wet walls in the living room. We observed that the ceilings in all the rooms are leaking. Asides from that, the shower in the two bathrooms are not working, and water keeps dripping from the side of the bath. It is likely the water from the bath is seeping through to the walls. I request that you send over a plumber by the weekend to fix the bathrooms by replacing the showerhead and probably the bath. I also want a carpenter to check the house's roof to identify the cause of the leakage urgently. I anticipate your prompt action. Yours faithfully

Dear Mr. Possible spelling mistake found.JackyLankyMankyJunky
Janky
,

I am writing to inform you of the multiple problems observed in Flat 32a, Private Lounge we rented from your agency last month.

My friends and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 into the flat This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 last week. Everything seemed great until the rains This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 three days ago. We woke up to pools of water in the four rooms and wet walls in the living room.

We observed that the ceilings in all the rooms are leaking. Asides from that, the shower in the two bathrooms are not working, and water This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 dripping from the side of the bath. It is likely the water from the bath is seeping through to the walls.

I request that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 over a plumber by the weekend to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 the bathrooms by replacing the Possible spelling mistake found.shower head
showerhead
 and probably
 the bath. I also
 want a carpenter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
's roof to identify the cause of the leakage urgently
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 anticipate your prompt action.

Yours faithfully

IELTS letter You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with three friends. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. Write a letter to the letting agency. In the letter: • explain your situation • describe the problems with the house • say what you would like to happen

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

159 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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