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You are planning a holiday abroad and will be visiting a town where an old friend lives. You haven't spoken to this friend in a few years.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give your friend a brief update of your life since you were last in touch Explain why you will be travelling to his/her town. Say what you plan to do when you visit their town.

You are planning a holiday abroad and will be visiting a town where an old friend lives. You haven't spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give your friend a brief update of your life since you were last in touch Explain why you will be travelling to his/her town. Say what you plan to do when you visit their town. 9ql3
Dear Amy I am writing to inform you that I will be visiting Waterlake next month and would love us to see and catch up on old times. I know it has been years, but you know life has been very demanding. After I gave birth to Jane, we moved to one of the interior villages in Congo to continue Paul's missionary assignment. We spent 2 years there but, thankfully, we are back in France. I recently gave birth to a bouncing baby boy, Jake. I will be coming over with my family to visit my mother-in-law; she moved to Waterlake a couple of months ago. She is yet to set her eyes on her two grandchildren. I hope to check out the new museum in the city and the waterloo springs; I learned it is such a place to behold. I would also wish we went mountain climbing together just like we always did when we were teenagers. Looking forward to seeing you soon Kind regards
Dear Amy

I am writing to inform you that I will be visiting
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Waterlake
next
month and would
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love
us to
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see
and catch up on
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old
times.

I know it has been years,
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but
you know life has been
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very
demanding. After I gave birth to Jane, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to one of the interior villages in Congo to continue Paul's missionary assignment. We spent 2 years there
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
,
thankfully
, we are back in France. I recently gave birth to a bouncing baby boy, Jake.

I will be coming over with my family to visit my mother-in-law; she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to
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Waterlake
a couple of months ago. She is
yet
to set her eyes on her two grandchildren.

I hope to
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check
out the new museum in the city and the
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waterloo
springs; I learned it is such a place to behold. I would
also
wish we went mountain climbing together
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just
like we always did when we were
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teenagers
.

Looking forward to seeing you
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soon


Kind regards
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IELTS letter You are planning a holiday abroad and will be visiting a town where an old friend lives. You haven't spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give your friend a brief update of your life since you were last in touch Explain why you will be travelling to his/her town. Say what you plan to do when you visit their town.

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166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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