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You Relocated To An Overseas Country Recently And Shipped Your Furniture Through A Shipping Company

You Relocated To An Overseas Country Recently And Shipped Your Furniture Through A Shipping Company 1aYJ7

I am writing to tell you about my damaged goods. I used your shipping company to send my furniture and upon unpacking, I realised they were severely damaged. I hope we can find possible solutions to resolve this issue. My household furniture was delivered to your company on the 15th July in Lagos, Nigeria. At exactly 7pm, your Logistics Manager received the items and assured me that it would leave for Chicago the next morning, 16th July. On receiving my items, I observed that the furniture were grossly damaged. The leather covering had peeled and the furniture made of wood were soiled. I am really disappointed about this occurrence as the furniture were imported from Italy and was given to me by my Father. I hope you can contact me so that we could discuss an opportunity for paying damages. Perhaps, you could get someone to fix the problem while you take full responsibility of the cost. Please let me know what you think about my suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Thomas Adeyemi.

I am writing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you about my damaged This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 your shipping This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssofaappliancebedcouchequipment
furniture
 and upon unpacking, I Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.realized
realised
 they were severely
 damaged. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope we can find possible solutions to resolve this issue.

My household You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssofaappliancebedcouchequipment
furniture
was delivered
 to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 on the 15th July in Lagos, Nigeria. At exactly 7pm, your Logistics Manager received the items and assured me that it would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 for Chicago the next
 morning, 16th July.

On receiving my items, I observed that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssofaappliancebedcouchequipment
furniture
 were grossly
 damaged. The leather covering had peeled and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssofaappliancebedcouchequipment
furniture
 made of wood were soiled
. I am really
 disappointed about this occurrence as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssofaappliancebedcouchequipment
furniture
were imported
 from Italy and was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to me by my Father.

I hope you can contact me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we could discuss an opportunity for paying damages. Perhaps, you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 someone to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 the problem while you take full responsibility of the cost.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know what you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about my suggestions.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely
,

Thomas Possible spelling mistake found.AdamAdamsAdamic
Adeyemi
. 