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Application letter to channel director.

Application letter to channel director. QVa6L
Dear mr Baron, I am writing to apply for a job of journalist at your tv channel which I saw advertised in '' Morning news '' programme. I am twenty - four years old and obtained a degree in journalism in Tashlent State Journalism Institute in 2019. I feel, I have a plenty of qualification needed for this position. I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. Then I can speak in English, Russian and German fluently, besides that I am able to work on computer. Moreover, I can get on well with new people easily. I am currently working at JSAC as a teacher for last 2 years. And I am looking for a position that allows me to develop my skills and experience. If you would like me attend an interview I would be able to come any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of your tv channel. I would be grateful if you consider me for this job. Your sincerely Norboyeva Zarifa.
Dear
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mr
Baron, I am writing to apply for a job of journalist at your
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tv
channel which I
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saw
advertised in '' Morning news ''
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programme
. I am twenty
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-
four years
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old
and obtained a degree in journalism in
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Tashlent
State Journalism Institute in 2019. I feel, I have a
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plenty
of qualification needed for this position.
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I
am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks
simultaneously
. Then I can speak in English, Russian and German
fluently
,
besides
that I am able to work on computer.
Moreover
, I can
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get
on well with new
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people
easily
. I am
currently
working at
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JSAC
as a teacher for last 2 years. And I am looking for a position that
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allows
me to develop my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and experience. If you
Consider removing 'would'. (Usually, 'would' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless to make a request or give a polite order.)
would like
me attend an interview I would be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of your
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tv
channel. I would be grateful if you consider me for this job. Your
sincerely
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Norboyeva
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Zarifa
.
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IELTS letter Application letter to channel director.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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