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You miss international flight due to problem at air port, what happen, why you missed flight and what you want from airport

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you that, I was not able to flew for business trip of flight number BA35X, due to medical emergency at airport. On 1/2/2021, I reached airport before the time for checked in online. Suddleny, I heard one announcement of medical emergency at airport. Because of one geriatric women got serious accident and they required O-ve blood donor. Fortunately, I saved her life by donating my blood because of no one other donor can be arranged by airport medical staff who has O-ve blood group. As I have to reach Ontario due to one of globe business meeting. I informed to concern person regarding all about my predicament. They were kind enough for me because of this incident they will postponed meeting for further 3 days. I would appreciate if you could please arranged ticket confirmation for flight number GH786X on upcoming monday at 10: 10pm. It would be kind enough to give some concession on it. I am waiting for your positive an prompt response! Yours faithfully, Anushree Raval.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that, I was not able to flew for business trip of flight number BA35X, due to medical emergency at airport.

On 1/2/2021, I reached airport
before
the time for
checked
in online.
Suddleny
, I heard one announcement of medical emergency at airport.
Because
of one geriatric women
got
serious
accident and
they required O-ve blood donor.

Fortunately
, I saved her life by donating my blood
because
of no one other donor can
be arranged
by airport medical staff who has O-ve blood group.

As
I
have to
reach Ontario due to one of globe business meeting. I informed
to concern
person regarding all about my predicament. They were kind
enough
for me
because of this
incident they will
postponed
meeting for
further
3 days.

I would appreciate if you could
please
arranged ticket confirmation for flight number GH786X on upcoming
monday
at 10: 10pm. It would be kind
enough
to give
some
concession on it.

I am waiting for your
positive
an
prompt response!

Yours
faithfully
,

Anushree
Raval
.
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IELTS letter You miss international flight due to problem at air port, what happen, why you missed flight and what you want from airport

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