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Application letter to the director of kindergarten

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Dear Sir or Madam I am interested in your advertisement in today's edition of '' BBC news '' newspaper and I should like to apply to be a member of your kindergarten. I am twenty- six years aged and obtained a degree in teaching young children in Jizzax State Pedagogical Institute in 2019. I feel I have a lot of skills and experience needed for this position. Firstly, I am fond of teaching children and playing together with them. Secondly I can get on well with any kids easily. Thirdly I know English, Russian and Spanish besides that working on computer. I am currently working st the study center called '' Kids English '' as a English tutor. But I am looking for a position that allows me to increase my skills and experience. If you liked me attend an interview I am able to come any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of your kindergarten. I would be grateful if you considered me for this position. Yours faithfully Selena Gomez.
Dear Sir or Madam I
am interested
in your advertisement in
today
's edition of '' BBC news '' newspaper and I should like to apply to be a member of your kindergarten. I am twenty- six years aged and obtained a degree in teaching young children in
Jizzax
State Pedagogical Institute in 2019. I feel I have
a lot of
skills
and experience needed for this position.
Firstly
, I am fond of teaching children and playing together with them.
Secondly
I can
get
on well with any kids
easily
.
Thirdly
I know English, Russian and Spanish
besides
that working on computer. I am
currently
working st the study center called '' Kids English '' as
a
English tutor.
But
I am looking for a position that
allows
me to increase my
skills
and experience. If you liked me attend an interview I am able to
come
any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of your kindergarten. I would be grateful if you considered me for this position. Yours
faithfully
Selena Gomez.
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IELTS letter Application letter to the director of kindergarten

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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