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I am writing to apply for a job of a secretary at your business office which was advertised in "Darakchi" newspaper.

I am writing to apply for a job of a secretary at your business office which was advertised in "Darakchi" newspaper. NmXN2

I am thirty-three years old and obtained a degree in marketing at Tashkent in 2005. I feel I have many of the important qualifications needed for this job. I am presently working as an assistant in the department at the market where I have been for the last four years. In addition to this, I participate in English, Russian and Arabian club. Also I am good at computer programming. I am proactive and able to hundle multiple tasks simultaneously. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. I enjoy several outdoor activities such as planting flowers and playing basketball. Iam sociable and I can get on well with new people easily. If you would like to attend an interview, I would be able to come at any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of your company. I would be grateful if you could consider me for this position. Yours faithfully, Shokhista Shalarova.

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