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You recently won a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in a an exhibition, invite your friend for the exhibition.

You recently won a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in a an exhibition, invite your friend for the exhibition. GG0w
Dear Sonia Hope you are doing well, I’m writing to share with you the good news is that I have in the first prize in a competition with photo going to be Displayed in an exhibition. You know well, last year I bought a canon DSLR camera, most of the time when I go outside I take beautiful picture, as u can call Nowadays it is my hobby, Therefore, I spend lots times with this hobby, five days ago I went to my uncle house it is located near Hakaluki haor, I took a picture at the evening of the Haor it has been most popular in social media, in our home town local social organisation arrange a competition they give their Huge amount for For first prize, I am very excited that my photograph will be in the exhibition, The exhibition on 15 April in the city council hall room you must come for sure. hoping to see you soon! Your lovingly Taj
Dear Sonia

Hope you are doing well,

I’m writing to share with you the
good
news is that I have in the
first
prize in a competition with photo going to
be Displayed
in an exhibition.

You know well, last year I
bought
a canon DSLR camera, most of the time when I go outside I take
beautiful
picture, as u can call Nowadays it is my hobby,
Therefore
, I spend lots times with this hobby, five days ago I went to my uncle
house
it
is located
near
Hakaluki
haor
, I took a picture at the evening of the
Haor
it has been most popular in social media, in our home town local social
organisation
arrange a competition they give their Huge amount
for For
first
prize, I am
very
excited that my photograph will be in the exhibition,

The exhibition on 15 April in the city council hall room you
must
come
for sure.

hoping
to
see
you
soon
!

Your
lovingly


Taj
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IELTS letter You recently won a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in a an exhibition, invite your friend for the exhibition.

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  American English
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6.0
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