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You recently won a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in a an exhibition, invite your friend for the exhibition.

You recently won a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in a an exhibition, invite your friend for the exhibition. GG0w

Dear Sonia Hope you are doing well, I’m writing to share with you the good news is that I have in the first prize in a competition with photo going to be Displayed in an exhibition. You know well, last year I bought a canon DSLR camera, most of the time when I go outside I take beautiful picture, as u can call Nowadays it is my hobby, Therefore, I spend lots times with this hobby, five days ago I went to my uncle house it is located near Hakaluki haor, I took a picture at the evening of the Haor it has been most popular in social media, in our home town local social organisation arrange a competition they give their Huge amount for For first prize, I am very excited that my photograph will be in the exhibition, The exhibition on 15 April in the city council hall room you must come for sure. hoping to see you soon! Your lovingly Taj

Dear Sonia

Hope you are doing well,

I’m writing to share with you the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 news is that I have in the first
 prize in a competition with photo going to be Displayed
 in an exhibition.

You know well, last year I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a canon DSLR camera, most of the time when I go outside I take This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 picture, as u can call Nowadays it is my hobby, Therefore
, I spend lots times with this hobby, five days ago I went to my uncle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 it is located
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Hakaluki
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haor
, I took a picture at the evening of the Possible spelling mistake found.HairAORHa orHào
Haor
 it has been most popular in social media, in our home town local social Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
 arrange a competition they give their Huge amount Possible typo: you repeated a wordfor
for For
first
 prize, I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited that my photograph will be in the exhibition,

The exhibition on 15 April in the city council hall room you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 for sure.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHoping
hoping
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
!

Your lovingly


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