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After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department.Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department.

After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department. Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department. OpQd

Dear Sir/Mam, I am writing this letter to request for a department change. Since, I have been associated with HR department from past three years eventhough I am an MBA graduate in finance from top business school. Undoubtedly, I would like to join the finance department where I can utilize my knowledge and do justification to my qualification. I would like to implement ideas to increase the profit of the company and bring our organization to next level. In addition to my degree, I have done an internship just after my college in an investment bank. Moreover, I am regular follower of financial news and stock market updtaes. Evidently, I am having academic eligibility as well as relevant work experience to work in finance section. Hope you will grant permission for this internal transfer. Yours Sincerely, Ginu Thomas

Dear Sir/Mam,

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change
. “Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
, I have been associated
 with HR department from past three years Possible spelling mistake found.even though
eventhough
 I am an MBA graduate in finance from top business school.

Undoubtedly
, I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 the finance department where I can utilize my knowledge and do justification to my qualification. I would like to implement This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 to increase the profit of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and bring our organization to next
 level.

In addition
 to my degree, I have done an internship This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 after my college in an investment bank. Moreover
, I Please check whether an article is missing: "am a regular" or "am an regular"am a regularam an regular
am regular
 follower of financial news and stock market Possible spelling mistake found.updates
updtaes
. Evidently
, I am having academic eligibility as well
 as relevant work experience to work in finance section.

Hope you will grant permission for this internal transfer.

Yours Sincerely
,

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 Thomas