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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food x3do
Dear Ganesh, How are you? How your family? I am writing about my journey to you. As you know I don’t have any knowledge about traditions and what gift I can give your relatives. I hope you can help me with advice in this way and perfecе example of that might be the links from the internet shops with goods that might be pleasant for your family. Also, I want to ask about how many activities for me you will have planned for; how I can prepare for that? It will be the first time in your country that why I confused about cloth which will be useful to take on this trip. I know only general information about the weather in your region but I think It isn’t enough information. Unfortunately, I have some problems with my stomach and very spicy food for me might make some injury to my health. I will be appreciated If we can avoid unusual dishes or you can send some information about what I can expect from the local cuisine. I try to fix this situation with some pills which can help with solving these issues. I so appreciate the opportunity to went to your country. I’m waiting for this trip so strong and want to assimilate with the local culture. With best wishes, John Dou
Dear Ganesh,

How are you? How your family? I am writing about my journey to you. As you know I don’t have any knowledge about traditions and what gift I can give your relatives. I hope you can
help
me with advice in this way and
perfecе
example of that might be the links from the internet shops with
goods
that might be pleasant for your family.
Also
, I want to ask about how
many
activities for me you will have planned for; how I can prepare for that? It will be the
first
time in your country that why I confused about cloth which will be useful to take on this trip. I know
only
general information about the weather in your region
but
I
think
It isn’t
enough
information.

Unfortunately, I have
some
problems with my stomach and
very
spicy food for me might
make
some
injury to my health. I will
be appreciated
If we can avoid unusual dishes or you can
send
some
information about what I can
expect
from the local cuisine. I try to
fix
this situation with
some
pills which can
help
with solving these issues.

I
so
appreciate the opportunity to went to your country.
I
’m waiting for this trip
so
strong and want to assimilate with the local culture.

With best wishes,

John
Dou
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IELTS letter A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
222 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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