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You are staying in a friend's house while they are travelling overseas. Recently, a storm caused some damage to your friend's house. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter * give details of the storm * explain about the damage to the house * say what needs to be done about the damage Write at least 150 words.

You are staying in a friend's house while they are travelling overseas. Recently, a storm caused some damage to your friend's house. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter * give details of the storm * explain about the damage to the house * say what needs to be done about the damage gM97
Dear Sam, How are you? I hope this letter meets you well and I hope you are enjoying the picturesque Malaysian landscape? Unfortunately, I have a bit of bad news. There has been a terrible storm. It's been raining heavily the last few days and last night was the worst. This morning the entire neighborhood woke up to tremendous flooding which has caused some damage to your house. I must inform you that parts of the house, especially the garage has been severely damaged as floating furniture and logs of wood seem to have broken through the wall on the left and many of the windows downstairs have been shattered. The garage door mechanism seems to have suffered some water damage as well. We await word from local authorities and relevant officials on what needs to be done with regards the flooding especially considering the power outage. For now I plan to salvage what I can from downstairs and move everything upstairs to one of the bedrooms. Sorry to hit you with such news during your vacation, please do not worry much as I have everything under control. Try to have a great time and enjoy yourself, I hope to talk to you soon. Warm Regards, Faisal.
Dear Sam,

How are you? I hope this letter meets you well and I hope you are enjoying the picturesque Malaysian landscape?

Unfortunately, I have a bit of
bad
news. There has been a terrible storm. It's been raining
heavily
the last few days and last night was the worst. This morning the entire neighborhood woke up to tremendous flooding which has caused
some
damage to your
house
.

I
must
inform you that parts of the
house
,
especially
the garage has been
severely
damaged as floating furniture and logs of wood seem to have broken through the wall on the
left
and
many
of the windows downstairs have
been shattered
. The garage door mechanism seems to have suffered
some
water damage
as well
.

We await word from local authorities and relevant officials on what needs to
be done
with regards the flooding
especially
considering the power outage. For
now I
plan to salvage what I can from downstairs and
move
everything upstairs to one of the bedrooms.

Sorry to hit you with such news during your vacation,
please
do not worry much as I have everything under control. Try to have a great time and enjoy yourself, I hope to talk to you
soon
.

Warm Regards, Faisal.
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IELTS letter You are staying in a friend's house while they are travelling overseas. Recently, a storm caused some damage to your friend's house. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter * give details of the storm * explain about the damage to the house * say what needs to be done about the damage

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
207 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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