Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter: • state your reason for writing • describe the problem and your concerns • explain what you would like the Principal to do.

You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter: • state your reason for writing • describe the problem and your concerns • explain what you would like the Principal to do. knOR
Dear Mr. Musa, I am a full-time student at the school for the subject in Business English. The Faculty and the school staff have been very supportive in my endeavor which has enabled me to excel. Unfortunately, I have learned that the summer internship which was a part of the course has been canceled and it is a matter of concern. Although joining the school has benefited me in learning the professional language, the summer work placement was the main reason for me to enroll with the school. I was expecting to gain some industry experience which would enable me to have a better chance to secure a job. It's my humble request to reconsider the omitted program since it was an integrated part of the course. If, that is not possible please consider issuing credit for another subject. I strongly believe you will that into consideration my case and early wait for your reply. Yours Sincerely, Uzair.
Dear Mr.
Musa
,

I am a full-time student at the
school
for the subject in Business English. The Faculty and the
school
staff have been
very
supportive in my endeavor which has enabled me to excel. Unfortunately, I have learned that the summer internship which was a part of the course has
been canceled
and it is a matter of concern.

Although joining the
school
has benefited me in learning the professional language, the summer work placement was the main reason for me to enroll with the
school
. I was expecting to gain
some
industry
experience which would enable me to have a better chance to secure a job.

It's my humble request to reconsider the omitted program since it was an integrated part of the course. If,
that is
not possible
please
consider issuing credit for another subject. I
strongly
believe you will that into consideration my case and early wait for your reply.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Uzair
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter: • state your reason for writing • describe the problem and your concerns • explain what you would like the Principal to do.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic: