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One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you can not manage to meet him at the airport on time. Write a letter asking him to wait for you at the airport and tell him how to identify you.

One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you can not manage to meet him at the airport on time. Write a letter asking him to wait for you at the airport and tell him how to identify you. mejL
Dear Sam, How are you? I am delighted to learn about your visit to my city. Although I am excited to meet you, there will be a delay to reach the airport on the time. Unfortunately, I have a very important meeting with a client from 1 till 5 on Sunday which coincides with your arrival day but rest assured soon after the meeting I will be on the way to the airport. Luckily the airport has been recently renovated and has many exciting shops where you check out some new collections to beat time. There is a very famous local cafe known as "Cafe Coffee Day" which serves delicious FDrench lathe until I come you could hang out there. Although I had sent my photograph, to locate me just keep a watch for a bald tall guy wearing a grey suit at the cafe. Additionally, I will be carrying a trolley laptop bag. Can't wait to see you. Best Wishes, Uzair.
Dear Sam,

How are you? I
am delighted
to learn about your visit to my city. Although I
am excited
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you, there will be a delay to reach the airport on the time.

Unfortunately, I have a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
meeting with a client
Nonstandard phrase. Did you mean: "from 1 to 5"?
from 1 till 5
on Sunday which coincides with your arrival day
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
rest assured
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
after the meeting I will be on the way to the airport. Luckily the airport has been recently renovated and has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
exciting shops where you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
out
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
new collections to beat time. There is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
local
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
known as
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
'Cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
Cafe
Coffee Day
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
which serves delicious
Possible spelling mistake found.
FDrench
lathe until I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
you could hang out there.

Although I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
my photograph, to locate me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
for a bald tall guy wearing a
Possible spelling mistake. 'grey' is British English.
grey
suit at the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
.
Additionally
, I will be carrying a trolley laptop bag. Can't wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you.

Best Wishes,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Uzair
.

IELTS letter One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you can not manage to meet him at the airport on time. Write a letter asking him to wait for you at the airport and tell him how to identify you.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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