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Requesting to a friend for help

Requesting to a friend for help A1Gx
Dear Jack, I hope you are doing well. It was great seeing you last weekend. I can't thank you enough for agreeing to house-sit. As you know, I will be going on vacation on the 24th of February; if you want to contact me during my holidays, I will be staying at hotel Taj. For any urgent issues, you can reach out on my mobile. My dog needs to be fed twice a day. There will be pet snacks on the upper shelf in the kitchen pantry area. Also, please provide him water at regular intervals throughout the day. He loves milk. You can give him that in the evening. Please don't forget to lock the main door before you go to sleep. I would like you to water my plants, both indoor and outdoor. For security reasons, please leave the patio lights open at night. I am looking forward to meeting you. See you soon, Abhisek
Dear Jack,

I hope you are doing well. It was great seeing you last weekend. I can't thank you
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enough
for agreeing to
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house
-sit.

As you know, I will be going on vacation on the 24th of February; if you want to contact me during my holidays, I will be staying at hotel
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Taj
. For any urgent issues, you can reach out on my mobile.

My dog needs to
be fed
twice a day. There will be pet snacks on the upper shelf in the kitchen pantry area.
Also
,
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please
provide him water at regular intervals throughout the day. He
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loves
milk. You can give him that in the evening.

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Please
don't forget to lock the main door
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before
you go to sleep. I would like you to water my plants, both indoor and outdoor. For security reasons,
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please
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leave
the patio lights open at night.

I am looking forward to meeting you.

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See
you
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soon
,

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Abhisek
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IELTS letter Requesting to a friend for help

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
156 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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