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You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • tell your friend why you are having a party • explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe • invite your friend to the part

You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • tell your friend why you are having a party • explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe • invite your friend to the part awAno
Dear Aisha, Hope you and your family doing great. I am really sorry to let you know that couldn’t reach you for a long while. My university classes have recently started and my tutor assign me a social project to distribute some blankets to homeless people as weather is getting freeze here. So that’s why I am terribly occupied. I need your favor to my 23rd birthday party on coming week. On this occasion I have planned a party at my house. I am inviting all of our college friends and colleagues. I really excited to see you all. At the party I have line up with some ideas. On top of that I wish to cook some delicious dish for my guest by myself on this special occasion. I instantly remembered that you made creamy double cheese penne pasta when we met last time. That was well seasoned, even now mouthwatering. I want to cook the same recipe for my guest. Please send me the ingredients list to buy and send me a preparation video as well. You are the first person that I am inviting for the party. So come to my house too early in the morning and we can spend much time together and will have chitchat as like we had during our studies. I am desperately looking to meet you. Yours lovingly, Aarthi
Dear Aisha,

Hope you and your family doing great. I am
really
sorry to
let
you know that couldn’t reach you for a long while. My university classes have recently
started
and my tutor assign me a social project to distribute
some
blankets to homeless
people
as weather is getting freeze here.
So
that’s why I am
terribly
occupied. I need your favor to my 23rd birthday
party
on coming week.

On this occasion I have planned a
party
at my
house
. I am inviting all of our college friends and colleagues. I
really
excited to
see
you all. At the
party
I have line up with
some
ideas
.
On top of that
I wish to cook
some
delicious dish for my guest by myself on this special occasion.

I
instantly
remembered that you made creamy double cheese penne pasta when we met last time. That was well seasoned, even
now
mouthwatering. I want to cook the same recipe for my guest.
Please
send
me the ingredients list to
buy
and
send
me a preparation video
as well
.

You are the
first
person that I am inviting for the
party
.
So
come
to my
house
too early in the
morning and
we can spend much time together and will have
chitchat
as like we had during our studies.

I am
desperately
looking to
meet
you.

Yours
lovingly
,

Aarthi
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IELTS letter You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • tell your friend why you are having a party • explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe • invite your friend to the part

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
227 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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