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You recently went to the cinema. When you got home, you realised that your cell phone had fallen out of your pocket whilst watching the movie. Write a letter to the cinema manager. In your letter, explain how and where you lost your phone describe the phone say what you would like the cinema manager to do to help you find it

You recently went to the cinema. When you got home, you realised that your cell phone had fallen out of your pocket whilst watching the movie. Write a letter to the cinema manager. In your letter, explain how and where you lost your phone describe the phone say what you would like the cinema manager to do to help you find it 6Qnr
Dear Sir, I am writing this email to request you to help me, look for my lost phone in your cinema hall. I was in the hall on Saturday, 27th March 2021 for the 5. 30 p. m. show to watch Avengers film. My seat number was P-36. I am guessing that my phone fell out of my pocket when I was watching the movie. The phone I was carrying had a blue case. It is a Samsung phone. Just in case you want to know the details, the phone model number is S10 with silver coloured back. Also, to mention, the phone is number locked for security purpose. I would request your help to find the phone as it has a lot of important data that I use day-to-day. Kindly ask your staff to search the phone, particularly below and around the mentioned seat. In case if someone has already found it and handed it over in your office, kindly call on to the number provided while booking the ticket. I will come to your office to collect it. I am looking forward hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Poonam
Dear Sir,

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me, look for my lost
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in your cinema hall. I was in the hall on Saturday, 27th March 2021 for the 5. 30 p. m.
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to
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Avengers film. My seat
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was P-36. I am guessing that my
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phone
fell out of my pocket when I was watching the movie.

The
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phone
I was carrying had a blue case. It is a Samsung
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phone
.
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Just
in case you want to know the
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details
, the
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phone
model
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number
is S10 with silver
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coloured
back.
Also
, to mention, the
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phone
is
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number
locked for security purpose.

I would request your
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help
to find the
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phone
as it has
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a lot of
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important
data that I
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use
day-to-day. Kindly ask your staff to search the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phone
,
particularly
below and around the mentioned seat. In case if someone has already found it and handed it over in your office, kindly call on to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
number
provided while booking the ticket. I will
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come
to your office to collect it.

I am looking forward hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Poonam
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IELTS letter You recently went to the cinema. When you got home, you realised that your cell phone had fallen out of your pocket whilst watching the movie. Write a letter to the cinema manager. In your letter, explain how and where you lost your phone describe the phone say what you would like the cinema manager to do to help you find it

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