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Last month you had a holidayoverseas were you stayed with some friend .they have just send you some photos of your holiday write a letter to your friend in your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

Last month you had a holidayoverseas were you stayed with some friend. they have just send you some photos of your holiday write a letter to your friend in your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you 5JRD
Dear John and Jane I hope this letter findes you happy. I 'm just writing this letter to thank you and sending the photos. I'm unsure forgettable for those days we enjoyed. While I met you. I couldn't search any other person for taking the photos. The photos are very clear and help me remember. Those days we are very veracious. I am committed for doing the assignment in my art full work. I thought it was finished early than I thought! Now I am back to normal. Do you remember? Those days have fun. Consequently I am eager to see you. Why don't you come and stay in my flat, in fact I had a spare room. Don't say esques for me any way come and stay with me. Had a great time. Hope you see you soonMoorthy
Dear John and Jane I hope this letter
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findes
you happy. I 'm
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just
writing this letter to thank you and sending the photos. I'm unsure forgettable for those days we enjoyed. While I met you. I couldn't search any other person for taking the photos. The photos are
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very
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clear
and
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help
me remember. Those days we are
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very
veracious. I
am committed
for doing the assignment in my art full work. I
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thought
it
was finished
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early
than I
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thought
!
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Now
I am back to normal. Do you remember? Those days have fun.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Consequently
I am eager to
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see
you. Why don't you
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come
and stay in my flat, in fact I had a spare room. Don't say
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esques
for me any way
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come
and stay with me. Had a great time. Hope you
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see
you
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
soonMoorthy

IELTS letter Last month you had a holidayoverseas were you stayed with some friend. they have just send you some photos of your holiday write a letter to your friend in your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

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  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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