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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. in your letter you should explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions gor sightseeing options.

Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. in your letter you should explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions gor sightseeing options. GyqL
Dear SamI hope you are doing good. As you know my summer vacations are approaching and here it is very hot during these days. I am writing this letter to inform you that my family and me is planning to visit your country and spend almost one month there. There are many places in london to visit. But I am a cricket buff and lords stadium is my perennial favourite. So, I want to visit there its magical feel is unmissible and unmistakable. As I am coming with my family so visit other places too like british meuseum, tower of london so on. I really need your assistance in exploring the local places of interest, enjoying the taste of london city and finally to go a full day shopping. I hope you will provide a detail information so that I can plan the trip well-ahead. Eagerly waiting for your reply. Give my warm regards to your family. Yours Simon
Dear
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SamI
hope you are doing
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good
. As you know my summer vacations are approaching and here it is
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very
hot during these days. I am writing this letter to inform you that my family and me is planning to
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visit
your country and spend almost one month there.

There are
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many
places in
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london
to
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visit
.
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But
I am a cricket buff and lords stadium is my perennial
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favourite
.
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So
, I want to
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visit
there its magical feel is
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unmissible
and unmistakable. As I am coming with my family
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so
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visit
other places too like
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british
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meuseum
,
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tower of london
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so
on. I
really
need your assistance in exploring the local places of interest, enjoying the taste of
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london
city and
finally
to go a full day shopping. I hope you will provide a detail information
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so
that I can plan the trip well-ahead.
Eagerly
waiting for your reply. Give my warm regards to your family. Yours
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Simon

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. in your letter you should explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions gor sightseeing options.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
158 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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