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You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible.

You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible. xlAN
Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well, and must be engaged in coaching for upcoming state level tournament of our senior's batch in Pune, organized in April 2021. I am writing this letter to share some unfortunate news regarding discontinuation of my training. First of all, I would like to thank you alot for your constant inspiration and efforts to improve my cricket from the day I joined sport club, and because of that I am now one of the most eligible player for future state level tournament. I am so overwhelmed with the brilliant training sessions of Sardar Sports Club for inculcating the skills set required for game. You also know that, I am desperate to be a master of this sport under your supervision, however due some unexpected medical circumstances, I am anable to persue this course. I have got severe shoulder pain due to consequences of past accident history, which is why I am physically unfit to play any sport for atleast 1 year. According to Physician, any kind of physical exaggeration may lead to shoulder dislocation unless, I take proper rest and care under medical observation. This news came as a shock to me, and I am in dilamma to play or not. Despite, my dream to complete the course and learn all strategies for future matches, I decided to stay back at home and to go for necessary treatment. As per the doctor, medication will cost me huge amount and to compensate that expense, I kindly request you for refund of course fees on prorata basis. I hope you will understand my concern and look forward for positive response from you in this regard. Your co-operation is always appreciated. Thank you. Rahul
Dear Sir,

I hope you are doing well, and
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must
be engaged
in coaching for upcoming state level tournament of our senior's batch in Pune, organized in April 2021. I am writing this letter to share
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some
unfortunate news regarding discontinuation of my training.

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First of all
, I would like to thank you
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alot
for your constant inspiration and efforts to
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improve
my cricket from the day I
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joined
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sport
club, and
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because
of that I am
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now
one of the most eligible player for future state level tournament. I am
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so
overwhelmed with the brilliant training sessions of
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Sardar
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Sports
Club for inculcating the
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skills
set required for game. You
also
know that, I am desperate to be a master of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sport
under your supervision,
however
due
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some
unexpected medical circumstances, I am
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anable
to
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persue
this course.

I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
severe shoulder pain due to consequences of past accident history, which is why I am
physically
unfit to play any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sport
for
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atleast
1 year. According to Physician, any kind of physical exaggeration may lead to shoulder dislocation unless, I take proper rest and care under medical observation. This news came as a shock to me, and I am in
Possible spelling mistake found.
dilamma
to play or not.

Despite, my dream to complete the course and learn all strategies for future matches, I decided to stay back at home and to go for necessary treatment. As per the doctor, medication will cost me huge amount and to compensate that expense, I kindly request you for refund
of course
fees on
Possible spelling mistake found.
prorata
basis.

I hope you will understand my concern and look forward for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response from you in this regard. Your co-operation is always appreciated.

Thank you.

Rahul
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IELTS letter You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible.

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