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You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible.

You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible. megN
I am writing this letter to express my sincere apology for discontinuing the current cricket training session at your athletic club, because of my health condition. Since childhood, I have had a keen liking for this sport. My dream is to enter the international cricket team someday. Therefore, in order to pursue my goal, I enrolled opting for this outstanding program at your prestigious academy. Unfortunately, because of my current scenario where I have fractured my spine, I would like to inform you with regret that I will not be able to show up on the field anytime soon, as I have been asked to take proper care. I wanted to check if there is a possibility for reimbursement from your end, as I have hardly attended any classes. If not please let me know if there is any other option like postponing the entire course by keeping it on hold for now. I would be grateful to you, if you could help me in my hour of need by, therefore, please help me out with the repayment by the earliest.
I am writing this letter to express my sincere apology for discontinuing the
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current
cricket training session at your athletic club,
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because
of my health condition.

Since childhood, I have had a keen liking for this sport. My dream is to enter the international cricket team someday.
Therefore
, in order to pursue my goal, I enrolled opting for this outstanding program at your prestigious academy.

Unfortunately,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
scenario where I have fractured my spine, I would like to inform you with regret that I will not be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
up on the field anytime
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
, as I have
been asked
to take proper care.

I wanted to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
if there is a possibility for reimbursement from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
, as I have hardly attended any classes. If not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if there is any other option like postponing the entire course by keeping it on hold for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.

I would be grateful to you, if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me in my hour of need by,
therefore
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me out with the repayment by the earliest.
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IELTS letter You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible.

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6.5
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