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You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible.

You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible. 7YEn
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you about my inconvenience in continuing the cricket course, which I enrolled and paid for. Since my childhood, I was very keen on learning the essentials of professional cricket as I was inspired by my role model: Bradman. I waited till the completion of my university studies, and as soon as I completed it, I joined your academy for a three-month short duration course. Since my joining on 20, last month, I was very much pleased with the training and I could do well under the supervision of expert trainers. However, an unexpected knee injury during the nets turned the fate away from me. I was taken to a hospital following the incident and the doctors ruled out a ligament fracture, for which I have to undergo two consecutive surgeries. As it is almost sure that I have to be in the hospital for at least a month, I hardly believe that I can complete the course. Hence, I would like to know whether there is any provision for a refund. I look forward to a favorable reply Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you about my inconvenience in continuing the cricket course, which I enrolled and paid for.

Since my childhood, I was
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very
keen on learning the essentials of professional cricket as I
was inspired
by my role model:
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Bradman
. I waited till the completion of my university studies, and as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as I completed it, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
your academy for a three-month short duration course.

Since my joining on 20, last month, I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
with the training and I could do well under the supervision of expert trainers.
However
, an unexpected knee injury during the nets turned the fate away from me. I
was taken
to a hospital following the incident and the doctors ruled out a ligament fracture, for which I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
undergo two consecutive surgeries.

As it is almost sure that I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
be in the hospital for at least a month, I hardly believe that I can complete the course.
Hence
, I would like to know whether there is any provision for a refund.

I look forward to a favorable reply

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible.

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