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You recently went to a public event that ypu think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to a friend

You recently went to a public event that ypu think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to a friend D2naE

Dear John, Hi! How are you? I hope this letter finds you in pink of your health. so I am inditing this epistle to let you know that there will be a festival in my society on the 2nd of October. I think you might be interested to participate in it. Firstly, let me describe to you what the event is like. Although, you are very familiar with our society culture either it is related to any festival or event, albeit this time our committee organized a cooking event which gives chance to every participant to show their aptitude at a state level. Probing further, you always make delicious items to eat as well as won several awards in cooking. Moreover, as I know you from childhood, you want a podium to represent your talent, hence this is a great opportunity for you to make your dream true. Evidently, I booked an online bus ticket for you. I will meet you at the north bus station. The day before an event we purchase groceries for our items. Also, bring some money and winter clothes with you because we will spend some precious time together. See you soon. Give my regards to my beloved uncle and aunt. Best wishes, Tom Smith

Dear John,

Hi! How are you? I hope this letter finds you in pink of your health. Use a comma before 'so' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short)., so
so
 I am inditing this epistle to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that there will be a festival in my society on the 2nd of October. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you might be interested
 to participate in it.

Firstly
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
 to you what the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
 is like. Although, you are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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 to any festival or You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
, albeit this time our committee organized a cooking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
 which gives chance to every participant to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 their aptitude at a state level.

Probing further
, you always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 delicious items to eat as well
 as won several awards in cooking. Moreover
, as I know you from childhood, you want a podium to represent your talent, hence
 this is a great opportunity for you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 your dream true.

Evidently
, I booked an online bus ticket for you. I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you at the north bus station. The day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 groceries for our items. Also
, bring This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 money and winter clothes with you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we will spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 precious time together.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Give my regards to my beloved uncle and aunt.

Best wishes,

Tom Smith