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Thank you for choosing our sports center. I am writing to inquire your feedback

Thank you for choosing our sports center. I am writing to inquire your feedback ENXnD

Dear Mr T, Thank you for your letter. Now, I am wrtiting to give you some feedbacks on your sports center. I would tell you the reason why I choose your center. It is near my house. It is because you center is near my house. That makes me come and do exercises more quickly and easily. Moreover, it’s very quiet and comfortable. Therefore, I always want to come there after finishing work every day. In addition, I extremely like your sports center due to the fact it is equipped with numerous facilities. However, there is a problem making me feel it is imperfect. There are some men who always stare at beautiful and young girls practising there. They maybe come there not for doing exercises. It is better if you can control them. Also, I would suggest you that your gym can be wider and set up more products that is suitable for children. Thus, I can take my child come there and do exercises with me. Should you need further information, feel free to contact me. Yours faithfully, Hihi.

Dear Mr T,

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Should you need further
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Yours faithfully
,

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