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writting a paragaraph (120-150 word)

writting a paragaraph (120-150 word) 75Q7X

Hi guys, My name is Lam. Today i will tell you about my the most important thing. It is may teddy bear. I call it was cún. When I was four, my mom bought it from toy shop. I love it so much because my family don't have too much money to buy many toys. When my mom gave it to me. I felt so happy. Its color is brown, its eyes are beautiful and it always smiled to me. It made from cotton. In the winter, i hugged it to sleep. Now, it is very old, dirty but i never throw it because it is a part of my mermory

Hi guys, My name is Lam. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you about my the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 thing. It is may teddy bear. I call it was Possible spelling mistake found.canruncutguncupfun
cún
. When I was four, my mom This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 it from toy shop. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my family don't have too much money to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 toys. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 my mom gave it to me. I felt This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 happy. Its color is brown, its eyes are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 and it always smiled to me. It made from cotton. In the winter, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 hugged it to sleep. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
, dirty This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 never throw it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is a part of my Possible spelling mistake found.memory
mermory