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You have broken your leg and you have received cards and gifts your colleagues write s letter to them .thanks them for what they have done .tellthem about what you have been doing.and describe what the doctor said about your recovery

You have broken your leg and you have received cards and gifts your colleagues write s letter to them. thanks them for what they have done. tellthem about what you have been doing. and describe what the doctor said about your recovery 9rqEn
Dear ana and japneet, Hello! How are you? I hope this letter finds you in pink of your health. I'm writing this letter to express my happiness by this letter. I was very surprised when I saw it. It's my favourite books and chocolates which made me happy. As you know that this month my leg is broken by road accident. It was very painful accident in my life. fortunately, now I'm well but I have pain in leg. Nowadays, I have alot of free time so that's why I utilize this time for my study. Besides, I take tution to neighbour children and side by side I get school tution fees from them. Anyways, my treatment is going on and my physiotherapist has been making meticulously plan for leg exercise. Doctor said to me, leg takes two to three week to recovery. I am greatfull you send me gesture of love by this gift. we will meet as soon as possible. With love, Jack.
Dear
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ana
and
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japneet
,

Hello! How are you? I hope this letter finds you in pink of your health. I'm writing this letter to express my happiness by this letter.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was
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very
surprised when I
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saw
it. It's my
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favourite
books and chocolates which made me happy.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you know that this month my
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leg
is broken
by road accident. It was
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very
painful accident in my life.
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fortunately
,
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now
I'm well
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but
I have pain in
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leg
. Nowadays, I have
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alot
of free time
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so
that's why I utilize this time for my study.
Besides
, I take
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tution
to
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neighbour
children and side by side I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
school
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tution
fees from them.

Anyways, my treatment is going on and my physiotherapist has been making
meticulously
plan for
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leg
exercise. Doctor said to me,
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leg
takes two to three
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week
to recovery.

I am
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greatfull
you
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send
me gesture of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
by this gift.
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we
will
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meet
as
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soon
as possible.

With
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
,

Jack.

IELTS letter You have broken your leg and you have received cards and gifts your colleagues write s letter to them. thanks them for what they have done. tellthem about what you have been doing. and describe what the doctor said about your recovery

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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