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REGARDING PART TIME JOB IN YOUR CITY

REGARDING PART TIME JOB IN YOUR CITY 66Jj0
DEAR FRIEND, HI! HOW ARE YOU? I AM GOOD AND WILL BE SOON COMING TO YOUR COUNTRY FOR MY HIGHER STUDIES. I LIKE TO PURSUE A MASTER OF SCIENCE IN ENGINEERING WITH ELECTRICAL STREAM AND THE COST OF THE COURSE IS VERY HIGH, SO TO HELP MY PARENTS WITH MY STUDY EXPENSES I WANT TO EARN SOME MONEY DOING SOME PART-TIME JOB SUCH THAT I CAN AFFORD MY LIVING ALONG WITH I CAN FOCUS ON MY STUDIES. MY FATHER MOTHER HAD DONE A LOT FOR ME AND I WANT TO RETURN OR LIGHTEN THEIR SOME ECONOMIC BURDEN. AS YOU ARE A RESIDENT OF THE PLACE YOU MIGHT BE AWARE OF THE WORK AND PLACES, COULD YOU PLEASE HELP ME FINDING THE JOB I WILL SEND YOU MY RESUME? PLEASE UPDATE ME IF YOU GOT A JOB FOR ME I REALLY NEED IT URGENTLY. I WILL BE VERY THANKFUL TO YOU.
DEAR FRIEND,

HI! HOW ARE YOU? I AM
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GOOD
AND WILL BE
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SOON
COMING TO YOUR COUNTRY FOR MY HIGHER STUDIES.

I LIKE TO PURSUE A MASTER OF SCIENCE IN ENGINEERING WITH ELECTRICAL STREAM AND THE COST OF THE COURSE IS
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VERY
HIGH,
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SO
TO
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HELP
MY PARENTS WITH MY STUDY EXPENSES I WANT TO EARN
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SOME
MONEY DOING
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SOME
PART-TIME JOB SUCH THAT I CAN AFFORD MY LIVING ALONG WITH I CAN FOCUS ON MY STUDIES. MY FATHER MOTHER HAD DONE A LOT FOR ME AND I WANT TO RETURN OR LIGHTEN THEIR
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SOME
ECONOMIC BURDEN.

AS YOU ARE A RESIDENT OF THE PLACE YOU MIGHT BE AWARE OF THE WORK AND PLACES, COULD YOU
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PLEASE
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HELP
ME
The verb 'COULD' is used with an infinitive: "to find" or "find".
FINDING
THE JOB I WILL
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SEND
YOU MY RESUME?
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PLEASE
UPDATE ME IF YOU
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GOT
A JOB FOR ME I
REALLY
NEED IT
URGENTLY
. I WILL BE
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VERY
THANKFUL TO YOU.

IELTS letter REGARDING PART TIME JOB IN YOUR CITY

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4 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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