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You recently went to a public event that you think you friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend.in you letter:tell your friend what the event was

You recently went to a public event that you think you friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. in you letter: tell your friend what the event was PMe2d
Dear sameul, Hi, I hope you're doing great. I am writing to share my experience about a wonderful event I had recently attended. Last week I went to Pune to attend NH7 weekender. It is a multi- city and multi genre, music and comedy festival. It catters various music bands, comedians and small business venture stalls under one roof for three consecutive days. You would have absolutely love the music festival. This time they have brought opaque and fire-bettle band and they did perform our favourites from their latest album. Along with that, they even invited Kenney Sabastian, Biswa Kanyanrath and Abhi Upamanyu for a live talk show. They are organising a similar event in your city next month. I would like to invite you to join me for their upcoming shows. I look forward seeing you soon. Your friend, Frodo
Dear
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sameul
,

Hi, I hope you're doing great. I am writing to share my experience about a wonderful
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event
I had recently attended.

Last week I went to Pune to attend NH7 weekender. It is a multi- city and multi genre, music and comedy festival. It
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catters
various music bands, comedians and
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small
business venture stalls under one roof for three consecutive days.

You would have
absolutely
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love
the music festival. This time they have brought opaque and
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fire-bettle
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band and
they did perform our
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favourites
from their latest album. Along with that, they even invited Kenney
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Sabastian
,
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Biswa
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Kanyanrath
and
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Abhi
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Upamanyu
for a
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live
talk
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show
.

They are
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organising
a similar
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event
in your city
next
month. I would like to invite you to
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join
me for their upcoming
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shows
.

I look forward seeing you
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soon
.

Your friend,

Frodo

IELTS letter You recently went to a public event that you think you friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. in you letter: tell your friend what the event was

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  American English
8 paragraphs
140 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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